Education has a significant effect on our live. It often determines our level of success. Everyone realizes that improving our skills and abilities is a great way to ensure more prosperous life. Some people believe that preschool education is one of the most effective way to improve our education and abilities. Others disagree. I believe that hiring more teachers is more advantageous and beneficial to the students. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the most prominent point to be mentioned is that more teachers in small class can help the students to stay more focused as well as avoid distractions. As they keep focused, their skills will be improved which make them successful and responsible people in the future. It can boost their comprehension and convenient understanding of the complex subjects to achieve our goals and be more successful. Nowadays, success is transformed into a challenge due to some reasons as inflation, sanction and political conflict. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. When I was at high school, I took a chemistry class that changed the way I was thinking about the world. My teacher asked me and my friends to make a presentation which demanded a lot of research. We gathered much information, however, the teacher was busy because there was a shortage of teachers in the school which affect our creativity and intellectual abilities. I knew that teachers always maintain a stimulating professional environment. As you can see, more teacher will improve the way of our education.
The second rationale behind me ideas is rooted in the fact that teachers help the students to brainstorm novel ideas. Teachers always encourage the students to interact with people in the classroom, which affect their social skills as they can figure out how to behave with people with different attitudes, perspectives, and consideration. If you are exposed to people with different ethnics, you will make unbelievable breakthrough. Therefore, it will make them excel in their future careers. I have to admit my opinion in this matter is profoundly influenced by my sister's example. While she was studying at a faculty of art, she was introverted. She always suffered from getting new ideas , making new friends and creating effective lesson plans. As a result, her teacher helped her to network with people and find new ways to get more information. If she did not deal with her teacher, she would not be thriving like she is today as the facts and experiences that people learn a decade ago are quickly becoming more obsolete. This experience taught me that by increasing the number of teachers, the education will improve.
Thirdly, by exposing to many teachers, makes it easier to gain more knowledge and information.Since the knowledge is the sum of all theoretical facts and experiences a human being collects during his whole life. Gaining more knowledge will increase our comprehension and help people to be more successful on their future career which will relieve any stress because people without jobs will feel directionless. My own experience is a good evidence of this. When I was young, I learned a lot from my teachers since they were more knowledgeable. They taught me a lot and helped me to improve the way I was thinking. As I was child, I absorb the information like a sponge and there was no technological applications that help you to store data, therefore my teacher encouraged me to do my best in my field.
In conclusion, I believe that increasing the number of teacher in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This is because it helps the students to be more focused, brainstorm novel ideas, and because it makes it easier to gain more knowledge. Everyone should recognize the effectiveness of education.
- TPO 10 Integrated Writing Task 70
- 13 Which area the government should fund to improve children s education 1 hiring more teachers to teach in a small class 2 preschool education before kinder garten 3 providing some training courses so that teachers can be more professional 73
- TPO 11 Integrated a decline in reading the literature
- 13 Which area the government should fund to improve children s education 1 hiring more teachers to teach in a small class 2 preschool education before kinder garten 3 providing some training courses so that teachers can be more professional 70
- TPO 33 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When teachers assign projects on which students must work together the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects 70
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e always suffered from getting new ideas , making new friends and creating effecti...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... to gain more knowledge and information.Since the knowledge is the sum of all theoret...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This is ...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This i...
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Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This is ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3242.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 646.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01857585139 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0414809386 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98447161132 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459752321981 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1005.3 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7540478532 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6285714286 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4571428571 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77142857143 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 29.0 11.8709677419 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248520145647 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659407666028 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624565422018 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161415248219 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617054845541 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 86.8835125448 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 692, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e always suffered from getting new ideas , making new friends and creating effecti...
^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
... to gain more knowledge and information.Since the knowledge is the sum of all theoret...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: a
...in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This is ...
^^^
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This i...
^
Line 9, column 104, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: a; a
...in class with low individuals will have a a great effect on our education. This is ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3242.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 646.0 407.700716846 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01857585139 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0414809386 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98447161132 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459752321981 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1005.3 618.680645161 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7540478532 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6285714286 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4571428571 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77142857143 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 29.0 11.8709677419 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248520145647 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659407666028 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624565422018 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161415248219 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617054845541 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 86.8835125448 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.