The creation of the internet had a huge impact on the global society and on the way of its interactions. Internet was first created on mid nineteenth century but it was widely spread at the end of the century, bringing a new way for people to interact and expand their knowledge about many subjects.
I believe that any other technological innovation changed the society in the way that internet did. Indeed, the creation of airplane and telephone allowed people to be easily in touch with someone who lived in a far distance. However, those requires mobilization, as the airplane, and the need to have already met the person previously, as the telephone. But the internet can be used to talk to people who lives far or to get to know someone new without moving from home.
The easy access to internet helps its widespread use. Nowadays no much is required to access internet, it is not an expansive tool and it can be accessed from cellphone, computer and even smart watches. Besides that, people of any age, social statement and culture have the opportunity to use the internet, what is not always possible to other kinds of technological innovation.
In one hand, the internet bounded different cultures together and make the world more uniform. Such phenomenon is called globalization. The internet was an important feature for the globalization`s improvement because is through it that people improve their knowledge of all the possible subjects, sell products, chat with others, etc. In another hand, the use of this technology reduces the social physical interactions, people mostly get to know more someone trough a screen than trough the own eyes and touch.
Although there are some harms in using the internet, it allows the acquisition of a vast knowledge, the improvement of world interaction and it is accessible for everyone worldwide. Internet is definitely an important technological innovation.
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- TOEFL ESSAY: The college years are the best time in a person's life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13015873016 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98850742325 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6002195867 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11811079447 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042273753015 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383598171994 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690387528462 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216010764758 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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