Teachers represent a significant role in children's life and they should be care about their word in the class. I am in favor of the opinion that teachers should not express their ideas about society and politic. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following paragraph.
To begin with, the political's opinion of educator should not be mentioned in the class Since it is extremely time consuming. Actually students are supposed to learn about academic lessons in class and if teachers states the irrelevant thing in class, they will waste the time. My own experiences demonstrates this concept. When I was in high school, my teacher talked a lot about the political social issues and there was no time for teaching the essential lessons such as mathematics ans sciences.
Moreover, saying the political view by teachers create many problems for both parents and students. Most of the parent do no want their kids become interested in politics. Since it has a detrimental effect on children and students may impress by these things. As an example, during my high school period one of my friends started to show interest in politics and it changed her way. Since our teacher allocated a day in week for expressing her view about that.
Thirdly, saying about social or political views in the classroom is very dangerous. It might the parents of some students belong to the government. So if the educator's opinion opposes to them, it will create many difficulties for teachers. Let me illustrates this with one of my experiences, When I was in elementary school, government incarcerated my teacher since she talked about politician.
In conclusion, I really believes that educators should not talk about the political and social things. Since it takes a lot of time,provides difficulties and teachers get into trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, may, moreover, really, so, third, thirdly, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99350649351 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78777207319 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6375531642 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245542125038 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809111065574 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631415435512 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146432342222 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00863484448738 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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