It is obvious that nowadays the development of technology and industry has had significant effects on human beings life. I strongly believe that the changes of today's world have helped improve people's lifestyle and their living conditions, and they are more satisfied with their lives than they were in the past. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my views using some reasons and examples.
I think the technological advancement plays a prominent role in improving people life. It helps them to have access to more facilities such as better education, health services, transportation system, and so on. Therefore, the quality of people's lives has increased, and it has caused them to live healthier and happier than the past. For example, in the past because of lack of medical facilities and equipment, many people had suffered from different diseases and died, whereas today people are vaccinated against these diseases. Scientists are inventing new medicines to cure dangerous diseases, which it leads to enhance people's health. The development of transportation system has made them spend less time to travel to other places, and they can save their time. Also, many years ago people had to spend a lot of money to make telephone calls in order to talk to their family members or friends, while today they can easily communicate with others using the internet, and it costs them less.
Moreover, I believe that individuals' knowledge and information has increased compared to the past. It leads them to communicate with others better and easier and to have stronger and broader social relationships in their communities. The development of communicational devices and equipment gives them the opportunity to be able to communicate with others all over the world and share their information with each other. People take part in group activities more, and it helps them to make new friends and have good time with them. For instance, using social media, I could find friends in other countries. When I go to these countries, we meet each other and they help me to be familiar with countries, which will be useful for me. Consequently, people are happier due to having robust and wider relations with each other.
To sum up, in my point of view, today technological progress considerably has affected human life. Because of more accessibility to various facilities and raise in knowledge and awareness, people live happier than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ry has had significant effects on human beings life. I strongly believe that the chang...
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Line 3, column 999, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g the internet, and it costs them less. Moreover, I believe that individuals kno...
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Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... Moreover, I believe that individuals knowledge and information has increased...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.145 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82805586932 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3676844718 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.315789474 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0526315789 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274156833355 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832716171393 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081901219282 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177335894149 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566101973526 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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