Entering secondary school is one of the important stages in people's lives . Students are not only learning knowledge that will benefit their whole life, but also building their characters. Thus, many secondary schools ask students to take art and music classes, which raises hot debates in society. Some people believe that school shouldn't make these classes compulsory, while other people contend that art and music education are essential for students' development and should give enough attention. In my opinion, students should take art and music classes in secondary school. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First and foremost, the education of art and music is beneficial for students' whole life. Many people assume that students should only attend classes that are relevant to their studies. But people who hold this view forget the fact that solely pursuing grades won't make students a better person. Art and music are also important parts of our society and civilization, and by learning these, students are exposed to a wider world. They will learn how to appreciate the beauty of art and music, which will be beneficial for their further improvement.
Second, art and music can also ease the hardness and tiredness of daily study. After a long day of hard study, students deserve to have some time to get rid of the tiredness.Take myself for example . When I was in secondary school, attending art and music class was the only time I could relax and enjoy artworks. Contrary to what others think, after a good rest, my grades not only did not decrease, but improved.
Admittedly, people who dislike the idea that art and music should be listed in the school curriculum have their own reasons, and some of them are reasonable to some extent. Like it might affect students' studies and leave them less time to prepare for exams. But if how to gain a higher grade is the only thing students are taught in secondary school, these kids' school life will be plain and tedious.
In conclusion, based on what has been discussed above, I truly believe that students should be required to take art and music class, it will not only prepare them the ability to appreciate art, but also enable them to relax themselves in the day-to-day study.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 75
- Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays more and more people spend too much money on their pets dogs cats and others although there are better uses for this money 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students should be encouraged to take courses like science technology engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in 90
- People across North America and elsewhere who enjoy watching birds put out devices called bird feeders and continually supply them with seed This practice is especially popular during the fall and winter when natural food sources for the birds become scar 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of the important stages in peoples lives . Students are not only learning knowledg...
^^
Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...ociety. Some people believe that school shouldnt make these classes compulsory, while ot...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
...e some time to get rid of the tiredness.Take myself for example . When I was in seco...
^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of the tiredness.Take myself for example . When I was in secondary school, attendi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92268041237 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43687429805 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8493860917 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.526315789 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256532104486 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924120969742 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592180966701 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161400453095 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453135136635 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.