Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern society, the education system of university has witnessed and experience radical changes on each and every aspects, especially the selection of basic lessons. some argues that history courses should be taken by all majors student. From my perspective, it is unnecessary for all college students to learn history courses and the reasons are as below.
First and foremost, in contemporary society, most of university students are dealing with heavy work and complicated assignments of their own major, which prevent them from learning extra courses on purpose. For instances, the students whose major is computer science, are always facing with complex issues when typing their code, such as compile error, syntax error and so on, and as a result, they need to check their work for many time or study new programming language in order to solve problems. Under this circumstances, it is unnecessary for them to involve in the learning progress of another subjects.
Furthermore, learning history more doesn't means that we could benefit from it as much as we spend. take bill Gates, one of the famous enterpriser for example. While bill studying in college, he realized that it is pretty waste of his time to get information from school courses, so he choose to quit his university and indulge in his own work of Operating system. Since then, bill gradually make his commercial success and finally achieve the outstanding economic position among the industries of information technology. As is known to us, bill himself didn't study or participate to any history courses, but he also fulfill the life-goal except those additional knowledge.
Admittedly, appreciating history knowledge is not a totally bad thing, which could help us to understand some problems comprehensively. However, we could not sacrifice too much spare time to learn these knowledge if we are not the history major. if we are not unable to specialize our major technique as much as possible, then how could those extracurricular theory benefit us? Consequently, we should consider our career life more than our leisure.
In a nutshell, I disagree with the proposal that all the university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field or study is, which may distract us from necessary work of our major. what's more, learning more history knowledge can not benefit our future life efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20408163265 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84201534631 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8276821884 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0588235294 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22983013664 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762586863269 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107098523954 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151164190456 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12203720765 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.