No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of traveling in a tour group. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose to travel with a tour group. I feel this way for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, people have visited the countries which they have never gone before, so they would not be aware of country’s extraordinary places. Knowledgeable guide could assist us to find the places where we want to visit. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. About two years ago, my friends searched for the somewhere to spend time, and I suggested them to go France because of its popularity. However, there was a problem that neither of us had seen France before. We went to France in a tour service, since our parents informed us about tour guide. All individuals on the trip gained good memories from trip because we met with exceptional nature of the country. Moreover, I am reported with much information about universities in France and decided to gain my bachelor degree there. As a result, if our parents had proposed nothing about tour guide, we would have faced many difficulties in this country.
Secondly, people have acquired little money with great efforts in the modern world, so they must not squander money on trips. If someone estimates an amount of money spent on solitary and group travels, he or she would notice that travelling with group is cheaper than travelling alone. Drawing from my own experience, when I traveled in a group to Guba, small town in Azerbaijan, trip leader arranged discounts on activities, food, and drinks. Additionally, he reduced the payment of travel because we were first costumers of his company. As a result, if I had chosen to go alone to Guba, I would not have faced these discounts and free service, which company afforded to its first clients.
In conclusion, I am of the belief that people must travel in a group led by tour guide. This is because the guide informs you about places which would interest you. Also, you can save money and expend it to another important things.
- TPO 29-Integrated writing 81
- TPO 38 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Playing computer games is a waste of time Children should not be allowed to play them Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 55
- TOEFL T P O 47 Integrated Writing Task 52
- TPO 48 Integrated Writing Task 81
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75979112272 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64118801456 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556135770235 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2337134145 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.15 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164541818616 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550533735405 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581077088159 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12537011394 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480939839892 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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