Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In todays high stress society with heavy workloads and high expectations from family it's of utmost importance to relax to get back on our feet to work again towards a better future. Some people prefer to relax by spending time alone but others prefer to have a relaxing day with other people. In my view, I believe that the best way to relax is to do something you enjoy our interact with people you love. I will explain my reasonings in the following essay.
First, when we feel down or are stressed it's nice to invite friends to an outing and have fun with them. When friends gather they can talk about different issues, do sports, and many other activities to have fun at the same time they are going through the same thing as well therefore, they understand our problems which allows us to feel calm because of their understanding. For example, whenever I was under a lot of pressure when doing my thesis I would call and ask my friend out we would meet up in a cafe and talk about our situations and problems this always allowed me to feel better to feel that I am not the only person having trouble and I can raise up again and do well better.
Second, being around others allows us to not think of other things and just live in the moment, putting aside our problems and have fun. However when alone humans tend to think of their problems and get absorbed by worries family and friends can let us take a breather and not think about our troubles. For example, whenever I'm alone and trying to relax I inadvertantely tend to think about how I am behind my projects and have not studied for exams but whenever surrounded by friends I just live in the moment and let go of my worries.
I believe that being surrounded by others allows us to relax better and have a fun time due to the understanding that our friends can show us and bring us out of our inner world letting us relax and have fun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...not think of other things and just live in the moment, putting aside our problems and have fu...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...utting aside our problems and have fun. However when alone humans tend to think of thei...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...out our troubles. For example, whenever Im alone and trying to relax I inadvertant...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...never surrounded by friends I just live in the moment and let go of my worries. I believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35492957746 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31433780857 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49014084507 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3115841736 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.545454545 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2727272727 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136528322381 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069288955952 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621257389102 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964408315279 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924242845059 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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