Nowadays, many mothers worry about which school would be good for their children. Schools can be divided into two main categories such as coed school or girls or boys high school. I think the coed school is better then girls and boys sepreated school. I will tell you three reasons to support my opinion.
First,the girls and boys seperated school is very danger. Girls’ and boys’ high schools have too many disadvantages. In South Korea, there are a lot of bullying incidents in girls’ high schools and a lot of violent incidents in boys’ highh school. Therefore, I was going to go to a girls’ high school, but I heard rumors that this acidents a lot, so I choose coed school. Also, there are other thigs that are scary. Girls’ high school is very difficult to get good grades. It is said that all girl students study hard, so no matter how hard they study, their grades are often low.
Second, the coed school is fun. It is must more fun to play together than just the same gender when playing with friends. For example, I had a lot of fun playing with boy and girl friends while going to school. In fact, if you go to a coeducational school, it is very fun to hear about couple stories or unrequited love stories. Also, when fighting between girl and boy, there is no big fight because different genders stop each other.
Last, there is a sense of repect for other gender. In school, there are so many things that girls and boys do not understand each other. For example, when the boys come back from exercising in summer, the smell of sweat begins to spread, and girls laugh so loudly that sometimes it interferes with boys. However, after spending a long time together, we understood each other. Therefore, now girls open windows to ventilate when boys come in, and boys understand even if girls make noise. This is cultivated as a habit of respecting and caring each other even later in society.
This is why I think the coed schoool better than single sex school. The coed school is more safe, fun and more respect other gender. If you considered about this problem, I strongly recommend the coed school. Coed school will shine your school lfe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...high school. I think the coed school is better then girls and boys sepreated school. I will...
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Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hool. I think the coed school is better then girls and boys sepreated school. I will...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...reasons to support my opinion. First,the girls and boys seperated school is very...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64248704663 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3084398921 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518134715026 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3588695304 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9230769231 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2377885135 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802329304305 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547686486005 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146824488891 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343627193538 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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