Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples.

are not exception
are not exceptional

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 473 350
No. of Characters: 2227 1500
No. of Different Words: 251 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.664 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.708 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.522 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 157 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.565 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.89 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.265 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.083 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

Hi, can you tell me what was the main weakness of my essay? Because my exam date is approcing and I really want to improve as mich as I can.

Thanks