Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is critically important that governments use their founds in proper way, in order to help the people achieve their dreams. Personally, I believe that investing in Olympic teams would be the best choice for the state to spend the money. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, I would say that, the governments should encourage their people to play sports. Any kind of sport including athletics will be a good idea for the individuals to play. I feel this way because we all know that there are a lot of benefits for all of us when we do physical activities. People that are athletics, rare have any health condition like diabetes, high blood pressure or high cholesterol. So, those group of people are the healthiest in our socieity. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I have been practicing sports since I was three years old and I am so healthy. I do not have any issues with my body and mind. So, I want to say that physicals activities keeps you fresh mentally and physically. Therefore, the governments should spend more money in athletics and keep their people healthy. This is because if the individuals are healthy they are able to work, and it helps the state grow, especially in economic way.
Furthermore, having athletics is also beneficial for the state, because they will go in competition with other states, and if the win, the state will keep the taxes of the prize. So, those money will go back in the state's budget. For example, my brother plays sport back in my country, which is Macedonia. Last year they had a competition in running with our neighbor state Greece. My brother was the first to reach the finish line and he won the first prize of twenty thousands dollars. From this amount, he only took fifteen thousand, and five thousands went in state's budget. Also, this is not his only time he takes the first place, so every time he is winning a good amount of money goes back to state's bank account.
This is why I think the government should support the athletics.
Taking everything into consideration, if the government spends money in atletics, it will never be a waste, it is something that one day they will get the money back. So, by spending the funds in smart way you will always be the winner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 945, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
... it helps the state grow, especially in economic way. Furthermore, having athletics is...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'those moneys', 'those monies'?
Suggestion: this money; those moneys; those monies
...e will keep the taxes of the prize. So, those money will go back in the states budget. For ...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hy I think the government should support the athletics. Taking everything into ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59708737864 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54499058838 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526699029126 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0575238465 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184171319134 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537562609174 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531377153513 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119472575065 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044173160289 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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