Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there are two reasons why I am studying in school, college and university. first is a get a satisfactory job. Second is to provide myself and family. if somewhere will be choice such as satisfactory and lovely job or secure and not lovely job, I will choose with confidence my satisfactory job, even if I should wait. In my opinion, wait a job that would be more satisfying is more likely in life. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
first of all, my goal of my life is get my dream work. my dream work from my childhood is to be it accountant. As you see, in our world with each day technology is developing. Eventually, there will appear robots and no works for lazy and for people who did not study. For instance, nowadays in my country high unemployment. because in the beginning of life, I mean in university person should know his own future job or at least direction. when people choose not lovely or as in our world parents’ chosen job, in the future it can give not satisfactory job. person will waste time freely. it is the main reason of unemployment in my country.
Secondly, any secure job would give stress and depression. it will going on whole life. main mistake in life is choose another job. May be this job have high salary. but whole life would be free wasted.
my own experience is compelling example of this. my teacher from history in my school always complains that her job is non-satisfactory. when she was applying to university, she wanted to be a lawyer but in this faculty were no place for her. because of indecision and one empty year, she had to choose this faculty. this decision, how she said, is destroyed her life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that satisfactory job is the main plan. even if people would suggest high salary or this kind of things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, at least, for instance, i feel, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58258258258 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70202527379 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525525525526 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7133941577 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5185185185 100.406767564 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.2962962963 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230714577785 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655660409392 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057384730803 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138414010178 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700389159594 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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