Friends can help you with many things in life. Whether it be your life problems, or simple math problems, friends can help you with everything. I think that friends with a good sense of humor is superior to a friend with intellect. I think this, because people with good sense of humor, can bring you up from a bad situation. They can also make you laugh and feel good about life.
Friends with a good sense of humor, can make you happy, even when you have not been having a good day. They can make you laugh every time. One example was when I was sad, I did not get a good grade on a test, but my friend had made me laugh, and I felt better about myself for the rest of the day. Humor can really help you with troubles you have been having.
If you are in a bad situation, or in trouble, laughter can bring you up, making you loosen up from the situation. One example is when you have to decide between two important decisions. You may be very stressed out about it, but a friend can always make you unstressed. This can help you a lot. Instead of stressing out about the situation all night and not being able to sleep, a little laugh can even have enough power to let you relax and let you sleep. Therefore you can rest and calm yourself down.
Friends are very important and they can be a big part in your life. Friends can do many things, such as making you happy after a bad day, or even bringing you up from a difficult situation. Good humored friends can really help you and is important to have one in your life.
- A friend is trying to reduce living expenses This person is trying to decide among the following three ways to do this Find a roommate housemate who can share living expenses Buy new technology products such as the latest mobile cell phone Buy less expens 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Physical exercise is more important to older people than to young people 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should require every graduating students to take public speaking courses Give specific examples and details to support your answer 83
- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 60
- Some people like to travel with a companion Other people prefer to travel alone Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...wer to let you relax and let you sleep. Therefore you can rest and calm yourself down. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23469387755 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10185643028 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455782312925 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2262435639 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1666666667 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303002315487 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137137586293 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103937575173 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23524443319 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603431497261 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 11.7677419355 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.93 8.01818996416 74% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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