Since the hunter gather times until today, meetings played significant role in each society. However, some people may hold the view that meeting with close friends and family members and having party rather than having big party and inviting many people. From my vantage point, I concur with the former group and the line below will shad on light my viewpoint.
First of all, the first exquisite point to mention to say is that meeting less people is better. Due to increase of the aurban population, individuals fed up with crowdeds and they need to find somewhere relax. Actually, meeting at a silence environment such as home and having good conversation after a good supper may help them. Morever, A good conversation is cheaper than a therapy.
Secondly, in approaching this issue, apart from what metion above, there is another subtle point which must borne in mind. There are many conflict which stemm from neiborhood relations between young and elder people. Some people,especially university student, make party until late night and disturb others. The idea of crowded party is not good for neiborhoods.
Last reason which deserves some word to tell is about nowadays it is popular meeting a few friends. A noteworhty refreshingly intelligible statistic reveals by a recent research conducted at MIT University shows that the young like to meet at home because of economical reasons. The research study has conducted the young people from same age group in ten university in the USA.. Consequently, students like to meet at home and do some activities.
To wrap up, one can coclude that there is no party like party with close friends. I believe that having time with people who make you happy is much more important than any others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er group and the line below will shad on light my viewpoint. First of all, the f...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...point to mention to say is that meeting less people is better. Due to increase of th...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...meeting at a silence environment such as home and having good conversation after ...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have borne' or 'bear'?
Suggestion: have borne; bear
...here is another subtle point which must borne in mind. There are many conflict which ...
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Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun conflict seems to be countable; consider using: 'many conflicts'.
Suggestion: many conflicts
...int which must borne in mind. There are many conflict which stemm from neiborhood relations b...
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Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
...ween young and elder people. Some people,especially university student, make party until la...
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Line 6, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is about nowadays it is popular meeting a few friends. A noteworhty refreshingly...
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Line 6, column 261, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...e young like to meet at home because of economical reasons. The research study has conduct...
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Line 6, column 379, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...e age group in ten university in the USA.. Consequently, students like to meet at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02405498282 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61559663489 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3295906867 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218415859332 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641087553747 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928079288495 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123351427007 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891312249489 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.