Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Undoubtedly, our modern life is much more complicated than the past, and there are a lot of sources that people can find news about every single country in the world. While many people prefer to know about events around the world, others agree with the obverse idea. Nevertheless, from my point of vwie, knowing about events happening around the world is critical for human beings. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essaw.
To begin with, A lot of events around the globe are global problems, and people should know about them. In fact, all human beings live in the mother earth planet and our action can affect other countries' people. For example, a war can happen far away from our country, but the effects of the war can produce a lot of negative impacts on trade, turism, student exchange programs, and international trust. Indeed, without knowing about events in the world we can not predict our future, so this seems rational to follow the world's news. Moreover, plenty of global problems affect all seven billion people around the world such as global warming, production of petrolum, and deforestation. Obviously, we should get information about these problems in order to stand against them.
Furthermore, if we know about events and issues happening around the globe, we can prepared for the same situation by improving our knowledge and get deeper undrestanding about all aspect of an event. For instance, a country hitted by a strong earthquake and people have major problem because of winter and cold weather. If we follow the world news, not only we can send them help, we can prepare ourselves to similar disaster. On the other hand, by spending time on world news webpages we get information about other countries condition and evaluate their peopl's living style, which helps us to understand our life better. Consequently, by knowing about events people can make positive changes in their life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should know what is happening in the world. This will help them to get information about what is the major problem of planet and what they can do in the same situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 983, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...e, so this seems rational to follow the worlds news. Moreover, plenty of global proble...
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Line 1, column 1321, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'prepare'
Suggestion: prepare
...sues happening around the globe, we can prepared for the same situation by improving our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89100817439 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49994023197 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531335149864 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9105086276 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.588235294 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266374150264 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103582263158 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696837375247 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266374150264 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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