Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Events around the world, unlikely to affect people's daily life for the most time, triggers heated discussion over whether people are supposed to know these events. This news, in some people's view, is far from us and has little influence on our daily life, so we should not waste time to know. On the contrary, my perspective is that knowing about events happening in other countries is significant and necessary for the following reasons.
First, never should we ignore that reading or listening to some interesting events or stories around the world are able to help people get relaxed and release stress. Nowadays people are quite busy and suffer from pressure stemming from personal and professional life. For example, students have to allocate most of their time to attending classes and preparing for exams, and thus they are almost stressed out. As a result, during their spare time, if they choose to read some news about some celebrities in other nations such as their favorite singer or basketball player, they will temporarily get distracted from their hectic school life and take a break for a while. As a result, they may pay more attention to their schoolwork after reading about these events and feel delighted.
Besides, the events happening in other nations will also broaden people's horizons, which will benefit people in the future. By getting some information about the events that happened abroad, people will obtain a well-rounded knowledge about a new country, which has a different culture. For example, from the news about how Chinese people celebrate their Spring Festival, people will begin to understand some features of Chinese culture, such as the pursuit of happiness and health. Consequently, if they come to China or meet with Chinese people in the future, they are more likely to know what Chinese people like and know how to get along with Chinese people.
Finally, although some events will not affect our daily life in a straightforward way, they may affect our life in the future or exert influence indirectly. Therefore, it is still sensible for people to keep eye on it. For instance, the news about some technological breakthroughs may not influence our life in a short period, but it may change our future life. Students are able to use this kind of news to discover their interests and choose a major. Investors are able to forecast promising technology in the future and make profitable investments.
In conclusion, people should attach more significance to knowing about worldwide news because it can help people feel entertained, expand their horizons and help make decisions in the future.
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 78
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone online games and social networking Web site 80
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past it was easier to identify what type of career job would lead to a secure successful future TPO39 Task2 61
- TPO40 Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think it is a good idea 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People in the past are more interested in improving their neighbourhood the area where they live than now 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a straightforward way" with adverb for "straightforward"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e events will not affect our daily life in a straightforward way, they may affect our life in the future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08735632184 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6089533535 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496551724138 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7108681239 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.944444444 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 5.45110844103 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194177245991 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708808937754 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517479115479 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116539653667 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535809821537 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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