Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Nowaday, some may hold the opinion that it is not neccessery for individuals to know about event happening around the world, but the others have a negative attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, knowing about events that happen around the word is significant for individuals, not only does it extend their ability of learning process, but also it can causes their prosperity in the future. In addition, new statistical research proves that is so important.
The first reason which should be point out here is that, extend and improve individual's ability of learning process. As a matter of fact, if a person know about what happen around the world, he will caution about all the news. In order to clarify this statement I state one example. If Students in the university know about the events happening at the other universities, they will join that events, actually cause extend their ability of learning.
The second reason is that causes individuals prosperity in the future. In fact, approximately knowing about what happens around us play important role in our prosperity in the future. For instance,these days we are surounded by nemoures adverse news about a kind of disease such as corona virus, if we know about the news happening around the world, that will help us to aware about how to prevent infection virus.
Furthermore, the new statistical research on this topic in the middle east has shown that there is concrete and undisputed evidence which proves that the overwhelming majority of different social strata are compatible with this subject.
In the final analysis I believe it is important for us to know about events happening around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...ty of learning process, but also it can causes their prosperity in the future. In addi...
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Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pointed'?
Suggestion: pointed
...tant. The first reason which should be point out here is that, extend and improve in...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...improve individuals ability of learning process. As a matter of fact, if a person know ...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , these
...r prosperity in the future. For instance,these days we are surounded by nemoures adver...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99642857143 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70618858039 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4585973977 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.583333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.45110844103 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290156603215 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113075240682 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935607258005 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17663489658 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859606361363 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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