Life is too gorgeous and at the same time is too boring. It depends on how we can conduct our life and our routine schedule to enjoy more. One of the best ways to enjoy the life is to manage the job in the hustle and bustle of working life. Personally, I believe that it is more joyful having job tree days a week and enjoy the rest days of the week. I feel this way for two reasons that I will explore in the following.
First of all, having a job to work three days a week for long hours helps to work better and concentrate more on our job. Working more hours gives a positive feeling and tranquility, so, the works will be done more accurately and precisely. My experience is a compelling example of this. About three years ago, when I started to work for the first time, I had job whit tree days a week for long hours. When I was working, I was not in a hurry to finish as soon as possible. It was full of calm to do my work precisely without watching the time every thirty minutes. As a result, my works were done on time and utterly precise.
Secondly, working three days a week for long hours makes it possible to enjoy the rest days of the week with family or friends. After a hectic three days schedule, it is enjoyable to have free time going to picnic, reading books, going to gym and et cetera. For example: My brother works three days a week for long time then he is free the rest of the week. Therefore is always with his friends and enjoy his life. He sometimes play football and sometimes have parties with them. Moreover, when he comes to home, he is very kind and has time to speak and have fun with everyone in the family.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is a great joy to have a job with three days a week for long time. This is because the works will be done in a calm scenario and because there would be enough time to enjoy the rest of the week with friends and family.
- TOEFL T P O 32 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Parents today are more involved in their children s education than were parents in the past Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.Use specific reasons and examples to support you 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e then he is free the rest of the week. Therefore is always with his friends and enjoy hi...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...riends and enjoy his life. He sometimes play football and sometimes have parties wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10427807487 4.8611393121 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15947621601 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441176470588 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8587508392 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.75 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411006686544 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136551920188 0.076458572812 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12441841355 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270950708914 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043001678669 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 10.9000537634 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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