In teen life, friends are very precious. Mostly high school friends go on forever.
I disagree that it is better to have friends who are intelligent than to have friends who have a good sense of humor. I have two reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, hanging out with friends that have sense of humor makes you very happy and fun. Funny friends always feel excited. Hence, if they do anything it is usually fun. For example, if I am sad or upset my friend laughs at me just to make make me feel better. People say a true friend teases you when you are in trouble.
Secondly, a person with good sense of humor is easy to get along with. Since their personality is very kind and fun, we can become intimate more easily. For a good example, I myself have a good sense of humor. Thus, I can socialize with many friends easily. Hence, I know almost all the students in my school and other schools.
In conclusion, hanging out with sense of humor friends is better in your life than intelligent friends because they can make you happy and they are easy to get along with.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: make
...or upset my friend laughs at me just to make make me feel better. People say a true frien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38725490196 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17104849257 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8160882352 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6666666667 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456684787616 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136378507325 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126108141643 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243645066258 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10408179089 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 11.7677419355 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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