We are living within an era supported by the blessings of advanced technology. The beneficiaries provided by the modern technology have made our life more comfortable and easier in compare to our grandparents. We are enjoying the facilities that were out of imagination to our grandparents.
First of all, The transportation and communication sectors have improved tremendeously over the last century. The usage of airplanes, buses and trains has made our transportation easier and faster. During grandparents epoch, one could not think that travel from asis to USA would be possible in one day's journey. The magical touch of technology in this sector has converted the impossible into contingent. On the other hand, Telecommunication- another sector developed within few decades- surprisingly reduces the burden of the process to convey massages. The postal massaging systems has been obsolete since we can able to call our desired ones staying anywhere in the earth within a second through the mobile phone.
Secondly, The availability of informations through the internate has ebbed the assiduousness that our grandparents followed in searching of different books and documents. The internate has augmented our ability to aquire knowledge by reducing our time. The information, documents or anything that you need will be ready in your monitor by a single click in your mouse. Take an example of working on my last thesis. I needed a lot of information and articles to explain the results of my research. If I were working in grandparents era, I would have to search these materials within library or books which would be cumbersome. However, I can easily access on information that I need to support my research. Moreover, The internate gives me a numerous option to choice the best articles as a lot of resources are availble in single click. This process not only help me to reduce my time but also increase my efficiency and quality of work.
Finally, The modernization of health sector is another blessing of technology. At present, we can detect different diseases accurately by using different machine such as X-ray, MRI, Doppler effect. The improvement in pharmaceuticals has provided a lot of solution in order to be cure from different diseases. Once complicated disease are completely curable with the help of technology.
- Communal online encyclopedias represent one of the latest resources to be found on the Internet They are in many respects like traditional printed encyclopedias collections of articles on various subjects What is specific to these online encyclopedias 76
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems 54
- Wild tuna a species of large ocean fish have decreased in number because of overfishing Recently attempts have been made to farm tuna by feeding the fish in ocean cages until they become large enough for sale However tuna farming has faced several problem 73
- Air purifiers are being used to protect our health from air pollution Many different types of air purifiers have been invented for better effects Here are some of the most widely used air purifiers HEPA filters are effective at removing allergens such as 76
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won t benefit their future careers 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...der to be cure from different diseases. Once complicated disease are completely cura...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23733333333 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15325412163 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4040626363 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2727272727 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107641085697 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.02799495678 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343706560802 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593793564947 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357826820087 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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