It is obvious that in today’s sophisticated world money plays an important role in people life. It is everyone’s moral duty to help others to have better living conditions. I believe that rich people should donate portion of their money to the poor. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think nowadays many people suffer from poverty all over the world. Also, some people have not sufficient income to meet basic requirements of their life. They are in danger of malnourishment and different diseases. Thus, the wealthy can contribute to charity. It helps improve the living conditions of impoverished people. It cause poverty in society to decrease and all people can live in better society. For example, my friend’ father is a prosperous man. He donates much money to charity in order to build schools in slum areas, provide food for the needy, and so on. Therefore, he has had positive effects on improving society.
Moreover, I believe that wealthy individuals by financially supporting poor people not only help them and save them from poverty but also benefit themselves. Most of the wealthy who dedicate their property to charity are famous people. It helps them to become more popular in society. As a result, it will significantly affect their career and helps improve it. For instance, in my city, there is a businessman who allocates most of wealth to assist the poor. As a result, ordinary people admire his action and buy products of his company. Hence, not only does he help the needy but also his business has been prospered.
Finally, having too much possessions ensure living a happier life. People who donate their money which they do not require, they have more satisfaction of their life. They feel calm and are more successful in their lives. As an example, scientific research shows that people who help others more and contribute to charity, they suffer from stress and depression less than others.
To sum up, in my point of view, rich people should dedicate their money to charity more than ordinary ones. It results in reducing poverty in society and improving it, increasing their popularity and calmness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...been prospered. Finally, having too much possessions ensure living a happier lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04371584699 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6978989351 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6879270039 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245671404967 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06475552885 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729747584277 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149102964765 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909118082272 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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