People’s health has always been one the most significant matter in each society, and finding factors which have impacts on this subject has been really important for human beings. In this regard, some people believe that clean environment is the most essential factor which can affect people’s health, while others have different viewpoints. As far as, I am concerned, I think that the first idea carries more weight. I will enlarge on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, polluted environment is the main source of distinctive types of diseases which are very detrimental to human’s health. As a matter of fact, bacteria and viruses often grow in moist places where they have enough nutrients, and where garbage is collected can be the best place for that end. Thereby, environment should be clean periodically in order to maintain citizens’ health as people usually throw out their garbage into environment day after day. As a way of illustration, take some metropolitans. There will be a lot of waste materials all around cities, if nobody gathers and recycles them. This amount of waste things is a great place for different sorts of microbes or bacteria to grow. Therefore, several diseases will spread in those cities, which is so deleterious for people and can affect their health conditions.
Secondly, people do not tend to do exercises in contaminated circumstances since those environments often have bad smells and views. So, when people do not exercise regularly, they will lose their muscles, and their body will be weak. That means people will be more susceptible to distinctive types of diseases which are harmful for their health. In other words, an environment should be so clean that everybody would like to spend time there to be in shape and make his/her body so strong that it will not be vulnerable to diseases. Take people from previous example, for illustration. If there were a great deal of garbage in those cities, no one would able to think about going out in order to improve his/her health. As a result, a clean environment can be the best incentive for people to assign more time to do some exercises to be fit, which is really noticeable in today’s hectic life.
To sum up, all things considered, I firmly believe that clean environment is the most significant factor with which people can enhance their health. Given the fact that, not only does clean environment prevent bacteria and viruses from growing, but also, it motivates people to do a lot of exercises which are really needed to improve their health.
- For hiring a person which one do you choose 1 Checking their social media 2 Asking their former employer 3 Hiring them as an apprentice for one month 73
- Agree or disagree Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together 55
- Should a city try to preserve its old historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television has destroyed communication among friends and family Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99071925754 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71105324583 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491879350348 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2212339504 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.55 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.55 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267264841058 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850468147085 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657866723997 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188117947946 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561703094534 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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