In the world of modernization, every person has different hobbies and has a right to do what he/ She wants to do with money. Some people believe that people spend too much money on their pets, which can be used for other purposes and others disagree. However, from my vintage point, people should use more money on their pets. I would like to give elaborated explanation for it.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people get sense of satisfaction and happiness, when they use their money for pets. Nowadays, people do not have company and friends to share their life. Result of tha...
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when human spend money on pets
when humans spend money on pets
he become member of my family.
he becomes the member of my family.
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