Supporting animals has a myriad of merits although, consuming plenty of currency on pets may evaluate in some ways. Some people preserve animals not to be eradicated, to stay balanced, and constantly evolved as well, nevertheless, some people just manipulate them to satisfy themselves or maybe selfishness and the matter does not germane to merely assistance. Pets are some kinds of creature’s species that were created before us like other animals and are entitled to survive naturally however some people invest an abundance amount of money exaggeratedly which holds a wealth of demerits. This is the writer’s opinion; I positively disagree with the pet excessive materialistic corroboration and the essay explains why.
First, nature should be respected normally which means animals dominantly deserve a normal life and definitely capture them in homes appears unfair since the case refers to the sense of freedom while individuals transform the mentioned domestic animals wildlife into artificial freedom certainly has not corresponded with the animal natural desire thus if you even supply all their facility dimensions, maximally you leave them to just be alive but it does not appear that desirable wildlife which seems some people may not ponder about. plus, if humans shuffle the wildlife which requires a giant fund both humans and animals will be demolished which is obviously visible in modern circumstances. for instance, let me talk about a family ‘which is one of our neighbors’ has two dogs and also two children. I was aware most of their capital resources have been spending on pets for varied aspects of nutrition and hygiene as well and that is not the end of the story, family’s parents assist pets not only materialistically but even emotionally which means they have more empathy toward pets rather than children whereas their kids have critical social and academic requirements which should be met and all compelling for a great deal of money and time. thus it is unfair and illogical to disburse animals rather than children who construct the human future.
Second, constructing modern social communities for children is one of the most critical necessities in the technology era due to the fact that children have essential spiritual necessities plus to materialistic fields .for instance , they have intuitively commitment round to each other to feel genuine life what provides them relaxing entertaining atmosphere such as sport fields plus high- ranked games leading to be more creative and relieved without strict disciplines which exist dominantly in the educational places owing to a misconstrued imagination about an accessibility of whole facilities in schools .a myriad of scientific research have shown a great deal of personality disorders in children in metropolitan cities and generally in modern lifestyle since parents may not assign necessary notice due to of hustle bustle of modern busy life involvement to earn living perhaps offer to administrate a simple and rudimentary requirements but children definitely hunger for an immeasurable psychological claims which are not available at homes throughout modern lifestyle therefore economic contribution strategies should be planned on essential priorities organized for humans at first and then other creatures considering human has immeasurable requirements must be vitally provided while animals have some demands as well, however they have not lacked a luxury lifestyle what some people have granted for. Animals solely should not be assaulted and their surrounding nature being stayed intact. for example, we should impose some strict regulation against cutting trees and demolishing jungles as natural places nonetheless humans have forgotten the point that has animals plus their environments mistaken as toys and a domain to be experienced in all conceptual ways which mean human evades their natural environment on a hand and try to create them a luxury lifestyle on the other hand! that is a terrifying modern attitude in a glance to be modified. Second, constructing modern social communities for children is one of the most critical necessities in the technology era due to the fact that children have essential spiritual necessities plus to materialistic fields .for instance , they have intuitively commitment round to each other to feel genuine life what provides them relaxing entertaining atmosphere such as sport fields plus high- ranked games leading to be more creative and relieved without strict disciplines which exist dominantly in the educational places owing to a misconstrued imagination about an accessibility of whole facilities in schools .a myriad of scientific research have shown a great deal of personality disorders in children in metropolitan cities and generally in modern lifestyle since parents may not assign necessary notice due to of hustle bustle of modern busy life involvement to earn living perhaps offer to administrate a simple and rudimentary requirements but children definitely hunger for an immeasurable psychological claims which are not available at homes throughout modern lifestyle therefore economic contribution strategies should be planned on essential priorities organized for humans at first and then other creatures considering human has immeasurable requirements must be vitally provided while animals have some demands as well, however they have not lacked a luxury lifestyle what some people have granted for. Animals solely should not be assaulted and their surrounding nature being stayed intact. for example, we should impose some strict regulation against cutting trees and demolishing jungles as natural places nonetheless humans have forgotten the point that has animals plus their environments mistaken as toys and a domain to be experienced in all conceptual ways which mean human evades their natural environment on a hand and try to create them a luxury lifestyle on the other hand! that is a terrifying modern attitude in a glance to be modified.
In conclusion, conserving animals is a crucial matter nevertheless it had better be done through developing their wildlife not by expanding plenty of money to manipulate innate situations moreover realistic individual’s requirements should be settled in priority whichever not to be interpreted as satisfying individual’s selfishness although. Human is human and animal is animal. That is what it is. Being trans placed could bring a giant disaster.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Job has a more significant effect on your overall than social life dies 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Nowadays more and more people spend too much money on their pets dogs cats and others although there are better uses for this money 82
- Students in the university club want to help others but they can only choose one project a year Which one of the following is the best and explain why A help those students in a nearby primary school with reading and mathematics B help people who can not 80
- Some people prefer to go and visit tourist attractions where there are many tourists others like the ones with fewer people Which one do you select 76
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or meeting the teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion which of the following is the best thing to do 1 Interrupt and correct right away 2 Wait until the class or meeting is over and the p 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 44.0 15.1003584229 291% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 35.0 13.8261648746 253% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 116.0 52.1666666667 222% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5486.0 1977.66487455 277% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 998.0 407.700716846 245% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49699398798 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.62059943403 4.48103885553 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01985363884 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 373.0 212.727598566 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.37374749499 0.524837075471 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1762.2 618.680645161 285% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 52.0 20.1344086022 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 410.968183252 48.9658058833 839% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.736842105 100.406767564 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5263157895 20.6045352989 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.3157894737 5.45110844103 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 79.0 5.5376344086 1427% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1264431421 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470546628087 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408177778694 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943198324126 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291656260794 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 11.7677419355 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 58.1214874552 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 206.0 86.8835125448 237% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.0537634409 227% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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