Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
Most people agree that modern technology have affected various part of the society in different ways. Personally I believe that the access to the internet is of great beneficial to both the individual and community and nation as a whole. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraph.
First of all Internet contains a lot of job websites, which people us to start career or find jobs. In the past, people had to go through pages of newspaper seeking for the vacancy post. However, after the introduction of the internet, job seeker can simple log into the job seeking sites containing numerous vacancy announcement by companies in a single go. As a result, they are able to easily find their desirable job. My personal experience is a compelling illustration for this. After my graduation, I was seeking a specific post for billing and estimating engineer in a reputable construction company. Although I went through number of vacancy announcement in magazines and newspaper for sever week, I was unable to find my related job. Then after many failed attempt I tried seeking job through the use of internet website and I was successful in finding the job I was seeking within an hour, which would have been impossible without the use of World Wide Web.
Furthermore, the Internet makes it easy to communicate with our love one even if we are far from them, which reduces our loneliness. In countries all over the globe, people are using different social media sites to get in contact with their loved ones and relatives living distance apart. For instance, few years back, due to my job posting I had to live in vey secluded place. I was not able to have any interaction with my family and friends. This bothered me a lot, furthermore this situation also made me unhappy and my anxiety was increasing. However, later I use internet video calling to get in touch with my near ones. When I start getting in contact with them via video chat, it decreased my anxiety and was able to coop with my new environment as a result became happy and was able to focus on my job. This would not have been possible without the internet.
In conclusion, I strongly feel internet have positive effect in our life and have become intricate part of our life. This is because it helps in accelerating our career and because of internet we are able to strengthen our bond with family and friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2000.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72813238771 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66385471178 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529550827423 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2601684795 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2380952381 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127414878048 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038994589402 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403590520097 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828106447477 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211345098022 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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