Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Submitted by mahboobe on Wed, 06/22/2016 - 05:15

Children are like white board which parents can paint them with beautiful colors or make them dirty with improper upbringing. Although children learn a large number of things in school, I agree with this statement that parents are the best teachers. There are three reasons why I have this preference.

First and foremost, home is the first place which a baby experiences from the very first day of her/his born and parents are first persons whom he/ she detects; so, undoubtedly they are first and the best teachers that each child can have. There are several researches and also personal experiences which show childhood is the crucially importance period in learning for everybody. For example though I am a thirty-year old woman I remember most of experiences and everything which my parents thought me in my childhood.

Another prominent reason is that, parents love their children truly, therefore they try hard to train their children in the best way specially educated parents who study a lot before having children. So, parents undoubtedly are the best teachers.

Last but not least, the most trustworthy persons for a child are his/her parents so that children accept everything their parents say immediately even if it would not be right. As an instance, I have a little nephew who is five-year old; he asks his mother as much as question he can and just accept his mother explanation. If I answer his question he will double check the answers with his mother.
To sum up, because of deep relationship between parents and their children they can be the best and most effective teachers for their children if they study psychological book about children upbringing and behave them properly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...per upbringing. Although children learn a large number of things in school, I agree with this sta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the experiences') or simply say ''most experiences''.
Suggestion: most of the experiences; most experiences
...I am a thirty-year old woman I remember most of experiences and everything which my parents thought...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and just accept his mother explanation. If I answer his question he will double ch...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218241042345 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.156351791531 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100977198697 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0684039087948 0.046263068375 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0977198697068 0.0685040099705 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110749185668 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0195439739414 0.0351676179071 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64630187401 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00651465798046 0.0309702414327 21% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00325732899023 0.00188951952338 172% => OK
Determiners: 0.071661237785 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195439739414 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0260586319218 0.0139019557991 187% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1709.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 284.0 408.028673835 70% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0176056338 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345070422535 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274647887324 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19014084507 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12323943662 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64630187401 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.6237944437 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6666666667 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6650068454 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 51.1314553991 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.08080808081 1.45489161554 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297321693729 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125367539461 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724254014606 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621730017807 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179588557535 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132973127354 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824473722131 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.15931719636 0.336927656856 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0144512696631 0.067059652881 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179642705238 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513764351225 0.0618886996521 83% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...per upbringing. Although children learn a large number of things in school, I agree with this sta...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the experiences') or simply say ''most experiences''.
Suggestion: most of the experiences; most experiences
...I am a thirty-year old woman I remember most of experiences and everything which my parents thought...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and just accept his mother explanation. If I answer his question he will double ch...
^^

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218241042345 0.229887763892 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.156351791531 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100977198697 0.0866891130778 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0684039087948 0.046263068375 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0977198697068 0.0685040099705 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110749185668 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0195439739414 0.0351676179071 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64630187401 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00651465798046 0.0309702414327 21% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00325732899023 0.00188951952338 172% => OK
Determiners: 0.071661237785 0.0887237588012 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0195439739414 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0260586319218 0.0139019557991 187% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1709.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 284.0 408.028673835 70% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0176056338 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345070422535 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274647887324 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19014084507 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12323943662 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64630187401 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.524397521467 109% => OK
Word variations: 59.6237944437 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 23.6666666667 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6650068454 48.84282405 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 120.699889404 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.5533526081 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 51.1314553991 45.7405998639 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.08080808081 1.45489161554 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297321693729 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125367539461 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724254014606 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.621730017807 0.497263757937 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179588557535 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132973127354 0.114077575197 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824473722131 0.0781384742642 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.15931719636 0.336927656856 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0144512696631 0.067059652881 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179642705238 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513764351225 0.0618886996521 83% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.