Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a well known quote called "Time is money" and everyone admits that nothing is more precious than time in our life. Although, some people believe that, now a days people are not utlizing their time wisely, rather wasting on mere enjoyment, however, I think that in recent days, people have become more serious about their life. I firmly belive this way because of number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, in today's world, job market has been highly competitive and consequently, that has changed the way people use to spend earlier days. Everyone has become very focused about their career and always strives to achive their best no matter in which field they are in. The technological advancement has provided various platforms to learn new things which has accelerated the pace of human being. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, just after my graduation, I got an offer from a product based company with INR 17 lpa annual income and as a fresher, in my country it's quite a good amount. But I never forgot my desire to pursure higher studies. During my tenure in that company, I constantly studied for the entrance exams in parallel and as a result, I couldn't get enough time for enjoying. For this reason, I believe that If I had never pushed myself to achive more, I would have settled in that monotonus job.
Secondly, I think apart from their daily job, people are more inclined to continue with their hobby over the weekends. Moreover, they are doing it very gracefully and with high dedication. Now a days, it is very often, that a software developer plays flutes, guitar even sings on concerts over the weekend and making money out of that. Drawing from my personal experience, my father was a professor of business management in a very reputed university, inspite of that he managed his time to look after our family business along with grandfather over the weekend. Furthermore, currently people always tries to open up a secondary way of earning. Hence, it is certainly clear that now people are spending thier precious time very carefully, instead of wasting just for personal enjoyment.
In light of the above mentioned passages, I strongly believe that human being has now become more careful about their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, i think, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86945812808 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55799413221 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4876152872 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13688428597 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414771576518 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536745921792 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668130419766 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441521089934 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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