Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
After pondering on the given statement for a while, I feel that people are spending less time on their personal enjoyments and more time on their activities due to the presence of though competitive environment in both academic as well corporate world.
In today's era of cut-throat competition, many working adults are overwhelmed with the plethora of office work. In order to hold their jobs, it is essential for these people to work beyond their comfort zones. As a consequence, these individuals are left with very little time to puruse their hobbies. One of my cousin would be an apt example to elucidate my viewpoint. He is working in the one of the most famous multi-national company. However, he is burderned with so much of the work activities due to which he is forced to stay back in the office until late hours. Thus, he is not able to spend quality time with his family. As illustrated above, the fear of job security is compelling many people to work for late hours thereby depriving them to carry the activities of their interest.
Furthermore, even students are not spared by cut-throat compeition. As recruiters are expecting scores of skills even from the freshers, they are busy in enhancing their skills and hence abstained from pursuing their personal hobbies. My younger brother is studying mechanical engineering. Due to the inexorable growth of digital technologies, he has to take extra classes for coding which leaves him with hardly any spare to pursue the activies of his interest.
On the top of it, my country's dwindled economy has led to substantial rise in inflation with no growth in our annual income. In order to fulfill the basic necessities, we have to do more than one job. For example, I am working as a consultant in an investment firm. However, to suffice the needs of my family, I have to additional wor for coaching classes for additional source of income.
Therefore in my eyes only handful of the people would be able spend more time on their personal hobbies whereas the majority of the people are spending more time working in their offices or towards the academics goals due to cut-throat competition in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... annual income. In order to fulfill the basic necessities, we have to do more than one job. For e...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...asses for additional source of income. Therefore in my eyes only handful of the people w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85675675676 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77291106827 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535135135135 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.166868503 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119177501703 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344829938302 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381234969297 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667464966493 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191859772874 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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