Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone thrives for freedom, liberty and independence to make their own decisions not being dependent on others. A person may take his decision without depending on others, this makes him/her self dependant, reliable and confident but is it always desirable? Sometimes seeking recommendations does not tend to develop dependency on people, it makes them more stronger to face all types of situations. Other’s opinions opens various other possible ways to judge before a person could take his decisions. In my view, any absolute thing can never be desirable for practical thing, so the decision of an individual being an absolute one without taking into consideration the perspective of others can never be desirable in this complex world. Various circumstances around us whether personal, political or social witnesses that a well consulted decisions helps to reach at a decision quickly and amicably. Such instances can be discussed in this essay.
I remember when I was getting admitted to my High School, one of my friend scored 82% in all Science subjects like Physics, Chemistry and Mathematics. She never showed any keen interest in science areas. She was always proficient in literature. But this sudden result developed a sense of confidence in her and she decided to enroll in Pure science in her high school. Her parents knew her weaknesses. But she avoided to listen to them and boldly took the decision. Later when in her high school results she failed in all the three subjects, she lost her all confidence. She appeared for the exam next year but still were unable to get good results, she somehow managed to get a 45% to pass the exam. Later in her life she took Literature for her research and excelled in it. Hence my friend got a sudden thought that she has grown enough to take self decisions, if she would have given some importance to her parents advice, she could have not faced that situation of utter depression.
Further, if we see from the political perspective of a number of countries like in India, when a ruling party has to introduce a new Law, it cannot be taken only with the assent of the Prime Minister of the country. Even if s/he is the Supreme head of the country, the Bill can only be acclaimed a Law when it receives the consent of majority of members in the Parliament. So such major political decisions also cannot be solely made on ones decision. It’s a conglomerated decision.
It is not always true that a self-decision might hamper us or affect us badly, a self made decisions can also help us to understand our capabilities, aptitudes, intelligence better than other. But when the advice or recommendations of others are also taken into consideration while making a decision, it usually prepare us to judge all kinds of perspective, whether good or bad and makes us further ready to face all challenges. Like while deciding our life partner, it is always our choice which is give prime importance, but sometimes parents decisions helps us to understand their age old experience in maintaining such important path of our life.
Thus it is always desirable to seek for other perspectives while making important decisions rather than depending on sole single decisions to make us more defensible for managing all through.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...lop dependency on people, it makes them more stronger to face all types of situations. Other’...
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Line 1, column 704, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion the perspective of others can never be desirable in this complex world. Vari...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in this essay. I remember when I was getting admitted to my High School, one ...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoided listening'.
Suggestion: avoided listening
...er parents knew her weaknesses. But she avoided to listen to them and boldly took the decision. L...
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Line 3, column 778, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...re for her research and excelled in it. Hence my friend got a sudden thought that she...
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Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had given'?
Suggestion: had given
...n enough to take self decisions, if she would have given some importance to her parents advice, ...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prepares'?
Suggestion: prepares
...ion while making a decision, it usually prepare us to judge all kinds of perspective, w...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ing such important path of our life. Thus it is always desirable to seek for othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2735.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95471014493 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82308403726 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 871.2 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3417355141 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.08 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.96 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960933361506 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267679240658 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305495326517 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629326617675 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420130484503 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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