The 20th and 21st centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes they have made in human lives. Perhaps the most important milepost of these two centuries is access to the internet in all places. Providing internet access is important as other services, and the government should pay attention to this. I strongly contend that nowadays the internet and social media are more important than anything. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the access to the internet in all the places, and in all the time, make this situation for everyone to work from far away. For example, in the coronavirus pandemic, people have to stay at home, and do their job with the internet, in this specific time importance of the internet shows up for everyone. At this time education is also dependent on online communication, and students go to the class, submit their homework, give their examinations all by helping the internet access.
Another reason which should be taken into consideration is that in such a sophisticated world traveling to another country is difficult, and need more time and a significant amount of money, so in these circumstances, the internet could be very useful, with this accessible everyone, every time can go anywhere.
The last but not the least reason to be mentioned is that with using internet and work from home many of translation on the street increases, thereby environment stays clean. Many Of the pollution in the environment depend on human activities. The government should improve internet access, and manage all the situations. Also with working from home parents have to much time to spend with their own children.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the aforementioned statement, one soon realizes that all human beings are naturally like to improve in technology so they try for this goals, and if the decision makes perfectly, everyone could use all this technology. So I personally believe everyone, especially government should try to make life better than ever. There is a myriad of other reasons, supporting the above statement, which could be mentioned but is not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...lso with working from home parents have to much time to spend with their own child...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04266666667 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84432971991 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4315085174 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.1875 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322344573129 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114544449226 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851244892201 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178547958644 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538692686127 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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