A debate which is raised about how vigorous are today's rules and regulations. Some groups of people hold the view that rules and regulations are too strict and need to be eased. However, some other groups hold a different view, and feel that today's rules are not too strict enough and need to be more stringent. From my vantage point, I concur with the latter groups for the reasons I address in this essay.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that rules and regulations protect people health. A common example which sheds lights on what was elaborated above are the rules and regulations related to smoking in public places. Although some people find those rules as contingent, I think they are fair because passive smoking harms people's health. The most common harmful effects are heart diseases, lung diseases and Asthma.
The second reason which deserves some thoughts is that rules and regulations may reduce accidents. Drivers would be more compliant thus they are more cautious on the roads . For instance, if drivers knows that if they make a wrong turn, they might get a citation. They will try to avoid that.Therefore, such rules would force drivers to comply with roads rules. Without having such rules drivers would be careless and cause accidents.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first to cross my mind at a glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. In fact, there is another subtle reason to be mentioned. The noteworthy, refreshing, intelligible statistics that was published in the American Journal of motor vehicle. The study shows that imposing rules and regulations may reduce accidents by thirty percent.
To wrap up, contemplating the aforementioned reasons one's soon realizes that rules and regulation are beneficial not only to enhance safety, but also to protect people's health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11221122112 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64602735927 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7406418433 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0555555556 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153873988167 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510306844765 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355701435733 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871919493216 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036849346906 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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