It is obvious that in today’s fast-paced world humans have acccess to various media such as TV,Internet, newspaper, and so on in order to get required information about different issues. Thus, these media play a crucial role in people’s life, and it is important for them to provide accurate and reliable new for individuals. I believe that today the media are more worried about the precision nad correctness of news than the past. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think nowadays, with the development of technology, people have access to diverse news resources in order to be aware of different issues. Thus, if they face some inaccurate news when they are using one of these media, they will never utilise that medium and will prefer to get their required information from other medium. In other words, the media are trying to present accurate and correct news in order to attract their users; otherwise, they will their fans and followers. For example, in my country, TV news programs often censor their news and do not broadcast detalis of news and thus I and most of people preffer to pursue the news through other resources such as Internet.
Moreover, I belive that nowadays more persons are using these media and individuals are dependent on these media more than the past. If they give people some inaccurate news, it will cause some problem for people. As a result, it is their duty to provide precise and real news for people bacause it will have majot effects on people’s life. for instance, in my country, some resources on the Internet announcesd that one of the famoud actors had died in an terrible accident; therefore, it would lead his family to be concern about his, and his mother became faint. Consequently, different media are resposiblre for their information due to the fact that it is possible that it causes some troubles and problems for individuals.
To sum up, in my point of view, nowadays the media are more concerned about their news because more people are using them in comparison to the past in ordet to gain their necessary information. That is, they are relied to these media more than the past owing to the advancement of the technology. In addition, they have access to various media, and if they receive incorrect news from them, they will not use it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Internet
...have acccess to various media such as TV,Internet, newspaper, and so on in order to get r...
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Line 2, column 601, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...roadcast detalis of news and thus I and most of people preffer to pursue the news through othe...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ve majot effects on people's life. for instance, in my country, some resources...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...at one of the famoud actors had died in an terrible accident; therefore, it would ...
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Line 4, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t news from them, they will not use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86138613861 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62785035541 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467821782178 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2714442621 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273933364877 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102551094561 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537555283716 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183014700629 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224217851205 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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