Communication has become utterly important part of all daily activity now a days. Weather you are going to arrange an event or just getting out for a small grocery shopping, you start communicating immediately in the form of weather updates or social network check-ins. As a result the devices meant for these purposes has become important part of our life. Among them Television is one of the oldest and important source of all kind of information and entertainment. Many will agree that television has improved our lifestyle in many ways but I would say it has jeopardies the communication within family and friends in many ways. Two of them are discussed in following.
First of all, Television has made an personalised entertainment hub around it. Once upon a time the whole family enjoyed the television programs in their living room. They talked about the program would have taken the dinner together there. But toady, with this rise and extended availability of technology, televisions has become very a common household, which is affordable for every room of your house. Furthermore, there are so many channels making different genre of programs that everybody has the luxury to have their own choice. As a result people has started to enjoy their own television at personal disposal. This has drastically reduced the family time together. Additionally, it has disrupted the common family norm which was drived by common culture during even 90s. I have example around me. Three persons of my Uncle's family lives in a house where three television sets are set up in three rooms. Once I went to visit them and I had to see them in three different rooms until the dinner time. But when I was a kid, in the same house there was one television in the living room. I still remember enjoying a popular magazine program all together with the family. And I believe today's television culture should be revisited to maintain and continue a happy and connected family life.
Secondly friends are also getting apart for this communication devices. There may be some other device like mobile, computers distracting people from social engagement but television has helped a lot to diminish the group activities once very much popular among friends. For example watching a game on the television will never give the excitement of watching the same game live in the stadium with friends. Take may example here, during my high schools there was a final match between Mohamedan and Abahoni(Two of the major football league of Bangladesh) in December when our schools was closed after final exam. People were so excited about this game that many of them along with us was standing in front of the ticket counter from the very midnight. With this, actually we started hanging out with friends long before the actual game started. And it is obvious that our enjoyment was doubled in the stadium when our team won the game. Though some can argue about the hassle of collecting the ticket, all the expenses involved etc, I would enjoy one game with my friends sitting side by side as a team in the stadium, rather watching the whole series on television.
To conclude, I would mention again communication and interaction have been interrupted, sometimes destroyed in many ways due to the omnipresence of television around us. It is sad but true, we have traded off our near vision for the tele one. And we should immediately take steps to fix this to restore our relationship within friends and family.
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Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'kind of', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239811912226 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.16144200627 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0783699059561 0.0866891130778 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.046263068375 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0658307210031 0.0685040099705 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126959247649 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0579937304075 0.0351676179071 165% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6669026995 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0172413793103 0.0309702414327 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00626959247649 0.00188951952338 332% => OK
Determiners: 0.100313479624 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172413793103 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109717868339 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3492.0 2387.08602151 146% => OK
No of words: 590.0 408.028673835 145% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9186440678 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342372881356 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245762711864 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164406779661 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11186440678 0.112833075102 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6669026995 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501694915254 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 62.1499037303 59.2087087015 105% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0322580645 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7498872701 48.84282405 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.64516129 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0322580645 20.5533526081 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.483870967742 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 43.608529251 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.55747126437 1.45489161554 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297707216866 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.068401328149 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0565242320102 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.405497530787 0.497263757937 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132880955097 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940940008316 0.114077575197 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517509410179 0.0781384742642 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.360814302115 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0707067130218 0.067059652881 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215540738815 0.210909579961 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019523330928 0.0618886996521 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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