Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Television is one of the greatest invention in human being. Many different TV channels generates influence on everybody, and it does not matter how old You are. Some people believe that TV is destroying communication between family and friends, other disagree with that. In my opinion, first statement is true, and I will explain it in two reasons.
Firstly, watching television is consuming enormous amount of time. There is no secret that TV is one of these activities, which people spend so much time that They cannot realize it. Therefore, many interesting TV programs and shows forces us to watch them all the time. Consequently, relations with other people, like our friends and family, are pushed on second plan. For example: I was a technology geek when I was young, so TV was one of the most significant source of my knowledge. Thus, I have watched all tech programs in TV soon after I came back from school. On the other hand, my parents wanted to do some more interesting things for them together with me like riding on bicycle or playing soccer but I was not interested in. That is why everybody in my family spent time separately and communication has been damaged.
Lastly, TV have bad influence on mental health because of addiction. Spending too much time watching TV generates problems with living in society. People cannot recognize truth and reality from fiction. Consequently, they are losing contact with friends and family. For instance, I remember my friend from High School, His name is Tom. He was seriously TV addicted. Me and my friends could not keep contact with them because he was angry all the time, not only on us, but he started to hate whole world. I remember how his parents were sad and heartbroken when They saw what their son is doing with his life.
In conclusion, TV is a dangerous invention which should be used with care. Time consuming and problems with mental health are one of the most significant reasons why contacts with friends and family is getting worse every day when we overuse television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
... the greatest invention in human being. Many different TV channels generates influence on ever...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83806818182 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64504198351 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565340909091 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.859369183 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4090909091 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159578467998 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476364165497 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451806500429 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111488742661 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359514789822 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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