Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some people think that children are taken valueable knowledge by schools beacuse they believe that a school provides that usefull knowledge for thier students. In this case even parents give some information for thier children, it is never superior to school's one. Other people defend to even schools give great knowledge for thier students. They have never same abilities with parents to teach something for students. In my opinion, children could be learn easly with their parents rather than teachers or someone else. I am going to explain it with several example in future sentences.
Firstly, best teachers are parents beacuse they know better their children then everyone. In this statement, as parents has great capabilities to teach something about their children, they had already know how their children can learn any idea. For instance, when I was a student at first school, I had problem with Turkish grammer patterns I had never understood structure of Turkish languge even I could spoken easly. My first school had not learnt grammer patterns even she was teacher but my mother managed to learnt structure of Turkish grammer beacuse she had known me better then everyone. After this process I had learnt different kind of lessons from my mother beacuse she had been choosing intellegent way to give example to understand a lesson,when I was a studying in first school.
Secondly, parents has chance much more time with their children then other peole. Under the other definition a child get used to living with their parents in many years. This circumstance improve relationship between parents and a child and this relationship has great skills to fix any problem espeacially this problem relates with teach something. For example, my cousin had not been driving car, when he was a student university. Even he had been candidate to driving license he had never been successful. Most of teachers said that he had not enough abilities to drive a car who is trying to learn drive a car to him. However, his father had just one time tried drive a car to him. He was be able to drove a car beacuse he had felt much relax when his father tough him how he could drive.
All in all parents are best teacher beacuse of these reasons. Parents should much interest in with their children. If they really care of thier a child, he or she will be very succesfull person. Beacuse parents has great impact up on children and these children never accomplish if parents can help them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people defend to even schools give great knowledge for thier students. They have ...
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Line 1, column 555, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'several examples'.
Suggestion: several examples
...one else. I am going to explain it with several example in future sentences. Firstly, best te...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...l example in future sentences. Firstly, best teachers are parents beacuse they know ...
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Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t teachers are parents beacuse they know better their children then everyone. In ...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to teach something about their children, they had already know how their children...
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Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...about their children, they had already know how their children can learn any idea. ...
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Line 2, column 409, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have spoken' or 'speak'?
Suggestion: have spoken; speak
...ructure of Turkish languge even I could spoken easly. My first school had not learnt g...
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Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...urkish grammer beacuse she had known me better then everyone. After this process I had lea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...better then everyone. After this process I had learnt different kind of lessons f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f lessons from my mother beacuse she had been choosing intellegent way to give ex...
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Line 2, column 759, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...y to give example to understand a lesson,when I was a studying in first school. Sec...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his relationship has great skills to fix any problem espeacially this problem rel...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch something. For example, my cousin had not been driving car, when he was a stud...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the teachers') or simply say ''Most teachers''.
Suggestion: Most of the teachers; Most teachers
...g license he had never been successful. Most of teachers said that he had not enough abilities t...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to drive'
Suggestion: to drive
...s to drive a car who is trying to learn drive a car to him. However, his father had j...
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Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ever, his father had just one time tried drive a car to him. He was be able to dr...
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Line 3, column 698, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... time tried drive a car to him. He was be able to drove a car beacuse he had felt...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...ow he could drive. All in all parents are best teacher beacuse of these reasons. Paren...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87706855792 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47352280884 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465721040189 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.846188176 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6956521739 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0424974719395 0.236089414692 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.018273840145 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255713045034 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283234217815 0.150856017488 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128719037126 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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