Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Some people think that watching TV would cost a large amount of time, and it makes people lost connection to the reality, that is, losing connection with family and friends gradually. In my opinion, however, I believe that TV not only helps us to construct communication among people in our life, but also makes people closer.
TV shows are great entertainments and let us relax, such as variety shows, hot movies, award shows, famous series etc., and all of these are interesting topics that we can have a chat with others. Last month I was invited to my friend's dinner party, and most of the time in that party, we were talking about the most popular TV series then - Game of Thrones. Even I had a pretty nice chat with whom I'd never met before the party. A common topic bring us close, and makes us easy to start new relationships.
Besides the general topics of TV shows, watching TV is a good way to narrow distance between each other. When there is a worldwide sports games like FIFA or Olympics, people will gather in front of TVs to cheer for their nation teams. We yell together for victory and scream together for game loss. With TVs, people in the same place could enjoy every moment of the game and share their feeling to each others.
Most important of all, TVs help us construct the connection with the whole world. In the era without TV, it is not easy to get the news from thousands of miles away, and people only knew the things of their own regions. But now, the news on TVs gives us a chance to care more about the world, not just in our neighbor. Those news helps we know others from different countries well, and also provides us something to discuss with our friends and family.
In summary, TV bring us general topics to talk about, and give us happy leisure time with our friends and family. Furthermore, we can strengthen connection with not only the people around us, but the whole world. That is why I don't agree that TV has bad influences with people's communication or make people alienate from others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, in summary, such as, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54891304348 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32240942445 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7671999154 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901963096146 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333473068746 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327114726212 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588075007833 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349031122442 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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