Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern world everything is full of advance technology. It is necessary to utilize the technology because without it a person is useless and many things will become impossible to do. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that, in future road will be constructed in sky which decrease the demand of cars, whereas, others hold different perspective. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of using car. I personally, though, believe that in future there will be more cars. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that car is easy to drive and very convenient. For example, when I was in university it is and my mom and dad were always on work, it was difficult for me to arrange my ride. Than I learned how to drive which was extremely easy. However, as I am the college student and my earning is limited but after such low income i was able to manage my car accessory and diesel too. Therefore, this example illustrates the importance of car in every century.
Secondly, there are a lot of vehicles but the best one is car because it saves you times and it is safe as compared to others. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience, when I newly started the job and it was 35 minutes far from my place and I accustomed to go on bus and it take one hour and 15 minutes to reach. Later on in my mind I thought to buy my own vehicles and with traffic I always reach at my work place just in 40 minutes. No matter what century is people will keep using the cars for feasibility. Thus, this experience taught me in all time cars will be needed.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believed that in future may be technology get more advanced but the need of cars remain the same. Therefore, I recommended these reasons before making a choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Then'?
Suggestion: Then
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Message: “Than” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as difficult for me to arrange my ride. Than I learned how to drive which was extrem...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'time'
Suggestion: time
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
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...ce and I accustomed to go on bus and it take one hour and 15 minutes to reach. Later...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43977591036 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55753495019 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0965287551 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173796118291 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058240662483 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398001992225 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103447739817 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357084567609 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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