Nowadays, lifestyle is going to change, and everything around us is dealing with this change. Doing research through books and printed articles give their place to internet resources. I entirely agree with this new change, and there are different reasons I feel like this that I explore in the following essay.
First of all, the internet is more accessible and easier, while before using this technology, researchers had to spend their time at the library; also, their time was being wasted going and coming to the library; in contrast, The internet explores different resources throughout the world, and everyone can achieve it just in one minute. My personal experience is one of the compelling examples; when I was a child, we did not have internet, and my assignments were done by searching in the library, which took a long time but now I set on my chair while I undertake my investigations.
In addition, the internet leads scholars to access infinitive resources, and, before the advent of online resources, researchers were being restricted to limited resources, so the internet opened new windows to learning sciences and bonding researchers to each other. in this way, the internet strengthen knowledge and develop science acquisition. for instance, before using this technology, my supervisor said that for his thesis he had been forced to have long-term correspondence to receive two or three articles from the authors. Now the internet provides exclusive opportunities for students to have efficient research.
Furthermore, printed materials become spoiled for the sake of passing of time, using or unpredicted happening like water penetrate or burning and so on, but web resources were being protected and losing these resources is rare. For example, thousands of historical books keep in particular situations in museums due to their sensitivity to moisture and fire, which shows the high vulnerability of these manuscripts.
By and large, I am guessing that online documents are more popular because of their ease and convenience and are far superior to the printed alternatives, albeit there is some disadvantage like plagiarism. However, I strongly believe that online resources are a great invention in the contemporary era for scholars and students.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and coming to the library; in contrast, The internet explores different resource...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... and bonding researchers to each other. in this way, the internet strengthen knowl...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...wledge and develop science acquisition. for instance, before using this technology,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in contrast, in particular, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.325 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98104997453 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.35090239 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.461538462 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 5.45110844103 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176823387648 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616431464189 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556673582361 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888713861641 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050934021736 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and coming to the library; in contrast, The internet explores different resource...
^^
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... and bonding researchers to each other. in this way, the internet strengthen knowl...
^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...wledge and develop science acquisition. for instance, before using this technology,...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in contrast, in particular, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.325 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98104997453 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.35090239 48.9658058833 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.461538462 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 5.45110844103 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176823387648 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616431464189 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556673582361 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888713861641 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050934021736 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 58.1214874552 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.