Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In my view, nowadays young people do not give enough time to helping their communities. In this modern world, it would become a culture because the nature of this world caused this. there is three main reasons that I think lead the society to this manner.
Firstly, I think the society going to the way that not use the young people and won't allow them to help the community as well as before and it's because of the improving public health of the whole world that raise the age of presenting the elder people in society and also raise the retirement age. The elder one wants to handle everything in their own way and don't use the new way of that present by the new generation and it becomes a preventing cause of entering young people to help to the community.
Secondly, nowadays communication system such as internet-based communication apps lead the young people to have less communication in person and it causes that they make a unique world for themselves and it may cause that they couldn't connect to real world and its problems and also they can't relate themselves to the issues of the real world so they have not any solution for the problems may accure in societies.
And finally, they have less time than before to help. This world becoming much more bigger than before and the jobs need more quality than before so young people should spend a lot of time improving themselves to qualify for a job and become successful.
So, I agree with the main idea that nowadays young people spend less time on helping the community and its happened because of the nature of modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: don't
... handle everything in their own way and dont use the new way of that present by the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...r themselves and it may cause that they couldnt connect to real world and its problems ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...al world and its problems and also they cant relate themselves to the issues of the ...
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Message: Use only 'bigger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: bigger
...efore to help. This world becoming much more bigger than before and the jobs need more qual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, i think, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60563380282 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40546310045 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464788732394 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.387227428 48.9658058833 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 100.406767564 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.45110844103 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21227862373 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115529387681 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12068157702 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131624006278 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071847548058 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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