Human beings are gifted with a plethora of qualities, which other living beings usually do not possess. We, as humans, can sense, act, cry, laugh and show many other emotions and these feelings help in balancing our lives. Humor is one of such feeling which was gifted to us and I strongly feel that this quality needs to be embraced and utilized as much as possible.
In the first place, a person with a good humor helps a lot whenever we are facing hardships. We can come out of the stressful situations and forget all the troubles if there is a person with good humor alongside us. For instance, my friend, who works in the army, faces lots of troubles while performing his duty. He suffers from physical injuries every other day as he has to go through a stringent training process. But, at the end of the day, he cracks jokes with his fellow mates, friends and relatives so that he could get relieved of the pain and be happy. So, humor helps a person who is in
pain or other stressful situations.
Moreover, a person with a good sense of humor is liked by the people. According to statistics, women usually prefer men who crack jokes and have a lively atmosphere around them. For example, my cousin who always makes fun of people around him and makes them laugh attracts more friends each and every day compared to my brother who is usually in the serious mood all the time. Having people around us, who admire us helps in building strong relationships. Thus, humor helps a lot for a person to wants to socialize himself within the society.
In contrast, if there is no humor, there would always be dull environment around us, which sometimes reduces the productivity too. For instance, in my office, there is a team in which all the people are serious all the time and they do not make fun. When a new guy, with a good sense of humor, joined that team, there was a lively environment
thereafter and even the productivity of the team went up.
All in all, the sense of humor in a person not only helps him but also is beneficial to the people around him. It helps his fellow mates to grow and come out of stress in many instances. Hence, we must utilize this gift of humor to our fullest in order to grow as a person as well as to benefit the society in which we live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 89, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...nly helps him but also is beneficial to the people around him. It helps his fellow mates to grow and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46080760095 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35886477703 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503562945368 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3245510742 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.05 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135464078149 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500485139837 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494615286608 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594623371473 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425163417986 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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