Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by many in today’s world. Many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with people. Moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming more and more vague. this essay will explore the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people.
We all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or say. lies or white lies often have their advantages. the manipulation of white lies is the most obvious the business world. how many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or “the cheapest”? how many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical functions”? advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the absolute truth about its products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the products.
The same logic applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress on her birthday and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you freely express your opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s currently wearing? and spoil her birthday? unarguably, hiding(entirely or particially) the truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. Confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided. however, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an untruth. The basic trust in any relationships(businessman/customer, friends, parents/children) will be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. The story of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequenes of telling untruths. No one will believe you when you are telling the truth. your word will have no weighting.
In addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over when the truth(of previous untruths) will emerge. Untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when the truth is uncovered after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”. in the long run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party.
Everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. After all, it is understood the relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”. indeed telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'after all', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228571428571 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.146428571429 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0660714285714 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0642857142857 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0392857142857 0.0685040099705 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0946428571429 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0482142857143 0.0351676179071 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.46536472729 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0107142857143 0.0309702414327 35% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128571428571 0.0887237588012 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232142857143 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178571428571 0.0139019557991 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2824.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 456.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.19298245614 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320175438596 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265350877193 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190789473684 0.174417080927 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144736842105 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46536472729 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504385964912 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.7765927055 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8888888889 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4759447505 48.84282405 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.592592593 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.5533526081 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.296296296296 0.644075263715 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.54480286738 361% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.4239766082 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.48571428571 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454567213381 0.300154397459 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117482734629 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11027616036 0.0752933317313 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47723356814 0.497263757937 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185866057918 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173291440364 0.114077575197 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107777236716 0.0781384742642 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.444593840955 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0448265835394 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331556377619 0.210909579961 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638856984156 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.