Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
The planning and organization have been always important for human beings and they have been trying to have during the life. Although there are some people that do not have any plan for their present and future life, almost all people understand the serious role of the plan in the life. I agree with essential role of plan for individuals especially young people.
First of all, having a plan decreases the stress. People, who have a goal, usually have stress in the achieving process and ask themselves that what is the best way to arrive to my goal. Thus, thinking to the goals and the problems that will be faced provides stress for them, so having the plan for removing the barriers help them in order to obtain the goals. Researchers in the last years have found that individuals who have a plan in the entire life time have a free and non-stress mind, then it provides a good opportunity for achievement.
In addition, increases the chance for the success. Arriving to the success needs several tools, and the most essential factor is ability to plan and organize. The young people, because of their essential role in the society, must learn to have goals and the ways to attain them, then if they have plan, they certainly will achieve all of them. For example, I have a friend that is a successful person, has a good situation in his job and his family. One day, I asked him what is your key successes, he responded me that, "I have a plan for mu whole aspects of my life and also regulate everything based on that arrangement.
In summary, even though some young people disagrees with my proposal and express that the youth should now enjoy only with youth time, in my view this time finally is going to finish without any success. Everyone should have a plan for his or her life in order to decline the stress and achieve success. Who can ignore the essential role of planning during the life?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...dividuals who have a plan in the entire life time have a free and non-stress mind, then i...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... ways to attain them, then if they have plan, they certainly will achieve all of the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, in summary, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61695906433 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36539587318 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8473095541 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.266666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352168152978 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13375372012 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632634578045 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235603089175 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741501963271 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.