Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, more and more educational institutions are aiming at teaching students to make a thorough studying plan so as to improve their ability to organize, not only because it could help the students to study efficiently, but also prepare them for the upcoming life. As for me, these education is suitable for the young people.
First and foremost, planing and organizing plays important roles in our daily life for keeping us on course and prevents ourselves from the interruption by external forces. when we studying or working, plenty of disturbances exists, and if we have no prepare for some sudden events, like the invitation by friends, or a fancy movie just shows, we probably been misled by those enticements and fail to continue the undone progress. if these situations persists, then nothing could we obtain and thus we should put more effort to complete our work with guilty and bad temper. so, with a good plan, everything is in the control.
Furthermore, we can easily learn the ability of perfect organization when we were young. According to one of the study made by Oxford University, people aged from 6 to 16 years old could form a long-term memory more efficient than those elder, which means that the more sooner we study, the longer memory we make. Plus, if we cultivate these ability at first, we are able to learn more complex academic knowledge with a comprehensive cognitive mechanism in the future, and thus it helps us to perform better in the modern life.
Admittedly, some people, especially the parents, believes that it is a waste of time to study the ability, which could be utilized for their children to learn more words, formula or theories. However, their behaviors and views are shortsighted, comparing to the long life of studying and developing. Although learning the knowledge from school is important, knowing how to learn with high efficiency is more essential young people, especially when they encounter different types of problems and the traditional solutions are not fit with it, then the only difference between each people is the ability of efficient studying, which could be obtained through outstanding studying plan.
In a nutshell, though the modern life is quite complex and puzzle, people with a fine capacity of planing and organizing are able to get through these hard job and accomplish the life goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...udents to make a thorough studying plan so as to improve their ability to organize, not ...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this education' or 'these educations'?
Suggestion: this education; these educations
... them for the upcoming life. As for me, these education is suitable for the young people. Fir...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...om the interruption by external forces. when we studying or working, plenty of distu...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...d fail to continue the undone progress. if these situations persists, then nothing...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...te our work with guilty and bad temper. so, with a good plan, everything is in the...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'sooner' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: sooner
... than those elder, which means that the more sooner we study, the longer memory we make. Pl...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this ability' or 'these abilities'?
Suggestion: this ability; these abilities
...r memory we make. Plus, if we cultivate these ability at first, we are able to learn more com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03053435115 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71083022502 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.635620033 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.076923077 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2307692308 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177522736592 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704055958944 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415542650403 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108838647598 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240892107859 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.