Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
How to live a life is never an negligible affair in the hustle and bustle in modern life, where people with different characters have various ideas, style and principles. In reference to such an issue, the ability to plan and organize, in my opinion, should be regarded as important. Three of the main benefits is that it would prevent us from wasting time, help us manage our affairs well and live a vivid life.
Off the top of my head the reason is that we can save a lot of time and reach our goals directly with a delicate arrangement. My trip with my boyfriend to Shanghai City is a good demonstration for that. Before we started, we drew a traveling plan including which places of interest we would visit, what delicious food we looked forward to tasting and much more details. It turned out that we made a wise decision in that every day we spent there was joyful and almost not a minute was wasted.
In addition, the capability of organization provides us with a remedy when we are stuck in a great number of affairs at the same time. Accordingly, we can realize our dreams and get a sense of accomplishment. My idol is Stella McCartney, one of the most well-known women designers. She not only has her own brand, but is a mother of four children. Once she was interviewed about the secret to success, her answer was to organize and design your life and she pointed out that in such a complex world, no one can get all things well without plan.
So, would I be able to stand to defend myself when someone points out that he would feel a sense of restriction with so many plans and want to live an enjoyable life. While I will say that only when you endeavor to make all you want come true, can you feel pleased from the deepest part of your heart. Life without plan would not bring you the real freedom, but the excuse of laziness.
In a nutshell, the complexity of society nowadays is overall an undeniable trend and the trend is only going to continue. The ability to plan and organize will enable you to adapt it and bring you a promising future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
How to live a life is never an negligible affair in the hustle and bus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43832020997 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47545942542 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561679790026 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0220296734 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4705882353 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179046435099 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553720406038 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512447821165 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101214595969 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047221829356 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.