Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
At the turn of the new century, with the development of humans and modern technology, more and more people tend to explore new things, especially the young generation. Although many would argue that the technology worked on ease of life but it became complicated. In my opinion, young people should be able to organize and make a plan in their future life. I would suggest two reasons based on my general facts in addition to my personal experiences to support the argument.
The first aspect to point out is that technology is omnipresent in our daily life which is made a high amount of competition and a high number of experts in distinctive fields. therefore, people cannot conduct a better future, unless they know what they want to do in their lives and how to achieve them in a complicated environment. I still affirm the same idea because is no guarantee that young people need to know their objectives and make plans to achieve them and enrich their skills. one of the most important aspects of modern life is education. Nowadays, the competition became high in the labor market. So, without high education such as Master degree and Ph.D. young generation do not find a good job and not receive promotions in their jobs; Furthermore, they should know exactly what their prospects are and can plan to accomplish them.
Secondly, many benefits quickly stem from our plan and organized our life to success in the future. Also planning is a great teacher to build character and then our country because people are the most important corner in the country. If people are completely aware of their goals and plans, they are able to manage their relations and tasks. therefore, they are prone to establish a good family and take advantages of strong relationships with their family members.
To draw a conclusion, taking I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that one of the most important that in a young people live to achieve their goals and would guarantee their brilliant future in different aspects such as their workplace and family is coming through planning well.
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Suggestion: One
...o achieve them and enrich their skills. one of the most important aspects of modern...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ized our life to success in the future. Also planning is a great teacher to build ch...
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Suggestion: Therefore
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...elationships with their family members. To draw a conclusion, taking I have ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89577464789 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62977925703 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523943661972 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.696863867 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156341275469 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558766424118 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315142862079 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990735542803 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278760495488 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.