Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would he more satisfying.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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one of the most important aspects of our li...
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Suggestion: Jobs
...nt aspects of our life is having a job. jobs are like our second homes that we spent...
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...g that sometimes bother us. personally, i believe that taking an available job ri...
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... I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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... future for later in life. Nowadays, in most of cases it is preferable for having work experi...
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...d better for application for later use. my own experience is a compelling example ...
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...e is a compelling example of this. When i graduated from my university, i faced t...
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...s. When i graduated from my university, i faced two options that one is to work i...
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...aced two options that one is to work in a experimental physics sector or wait for...
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...for the position of astrophysics, which ive always dreamed of working, available in...
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...f working, available in another sector. after careful analyzing and speaking to my pa...
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...l analyzing and speaking to my parents, i decided to get the experimental physics...
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...sics job right away because in this way i can get two years working experience, w...
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...e application of graduate degree, and i wouldnt waste my time for waiting the job i wan...
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...uldnt waste my time for waiting the job i want, which i would leave for the gradu...
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... time for waiting the job i want, which i would leave for the graduate degree in ...
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...h i would leave for the graduate degree in future. now as ive worked for two years after ...
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...eave for the graduate degree in future. now as ive worked for two years after my gr...
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...r the graduate degree in future. now as ive worked for two years after my graduatio...
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...rked for two years after my graduation, ive realized that useful fields like experi...
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...at i really want in my life. Secondly, having a job as soon as available would ...
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...would help a person to save more money. instead of waiting for desired jobs, people who...
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...field, which is a theatre. At first, he didnt like the field, but out of urgency of h...
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...a theatre having an available position. because of his salary, over time he liked his f...
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...taking a job right away is much better. this is because, having a work experience is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, another thing, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53875236295 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54412849362 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438563327032 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6651087103 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.368421053 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8421052632 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297130476181 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104444339285 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813960065502 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19448183198 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446673469632 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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