Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
At present, many parents want their children to make friends with the people who are very smart and have good grades. This is because they want their children can get help from these people. However, from my perspective, I prefer to make friends with the classmates who are very funny and humorous.
Firstly, making friends with people who have a good sense of humor can release my pressure. This is because they usually can tell some jokes to you when you are feeling stressful. For example, when I was in the end semester at last year, because of the coming final exam, I feel very nervous, anxious and pressure in that time. Sso I needed to review plenty of knowledge of that school year and I had to take the part-time job to earn money at the same time. In this case, I had to stay up late at midnight every day. Therefore, in that time I felt that my life was hauled into a dark hole. In that time, my friend Lucy presented in front of my eyes, Lucy was my best friend in my class and she was very funny. She might find my emotions were not very pretty good, so in order to release my pressure, she talked jokes to me every day. This behavior of Lucy really made me felt unpressured. However, even though my friends are very smart or have good friends, they might not help me a lot when I am sensing pressure. From this event, it is obvious to see that making friends with the people who are very humorous can make people fell without pressure.
Secondly, making friends with the people who have good grades and smart might make you feel unhappy. This is because most of people who have good grades and very smart usually use the words which are very harsh and severe to assess other people. For instance, I was took part in an activity in the school during the last year. In this activity, I tried my best to complete everything which I need, even though I might do some aspects not very good. In the end of this activity, our school invested ten students who used to get good grades in the exams to evaluate our assignments. In this case, they used the languages and words which were very harsh and severe to assess our tasks, so they just found disadvantageous of our works, and they never praised the advantageous of our assignments. From this experience, every people felt very unhappy, so it is apparent to see that making friends with the people who are very smarts can make you feel angry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... make you feel unhappy. This is because most of people who have good grades and very smart usu...
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Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ssess other people. For instance, I was took part in an activity in the school durin...
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Line 9, column 582, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the exams to evaluate our assignments. In this case, they used the languages and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43146067416 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23184196251 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424719101124 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1049741864 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9047619048 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1904761905 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2380952381 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274418196719 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110066002839 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142381092388 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22243167094 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230291218714 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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