The statement that knowing about events happening around the world is significant, regardless of whether or not it will affect our daily life. Here go my reasons.
Firstly, worldwide events can affect the daily life of other people. For instance, recently a fire broke in a forest. Thirty firefighters sacrificed in this catastrophe. What a huge loss it is for their family as well as for our society. It is apparent there exists no direct relation among us, but under no circumstance can I live a happy life without their struggles and efforts. The people who serve as policemen, soldiers also grant our safety even if we never see them.
Additionally, we can mine valuable information from the events, then utilize them to do something. The intrinsic messages buried in the events may aid you in making money. Take the market of stock as an example, recently a kind of super fungus came into being, which can result in the death of sixty percents rate. The wise people may learn from this news, and consequently, they bought the stock in the block of medicine. It is very obvious that the price of medicine stock went higher dramatically. As you can see, it is a way of making one's fortune if you know the relationship between current events and your work.
Last but not least, knowing the events can broaden your knowledge as well as widen your horizon, stimulate your interests. If you know how the dogs and cats exchange their emotions, how the Everest got the height, how clean is the water in Dali, how fast the trains in China are. You will get a lot of joy as well as share it with your friends.
To conclude, I strongly agree with the statement. Whether each person or each event is relevant to us depends on our attitudes to it.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
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- TPO 54. The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water—what scientists call its salinity—has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is be 90
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, as for, for instance, kind of, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63225806452 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54025652756 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609677419355 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6398592289 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5789473684 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30492231746 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795204171809 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107043797915 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166577883033 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105708435394 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.