Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.

Although the majority regard that it is unnecessary for us to concern the events happening around the world, because it has nothing to do with our daily life, I hold a different point of view. From my perspective, knowing about worldwide events is of great significance. Here go my reasons.
Firstly, worldwide events can affect the daily life of other individuals. For instance, recently a fire broke in a forest, and thirty firefighters sacrificed in this catastrophe. What a huge loss it is for their family as well as for our society. It is apparent there exists no direct relation among us, but under no circumstance can I live a happy life without their struggles and efforts. Therefore, the people who serve as policemen, soldiers also grant our safety even if we never see them.
Additionally, we can mine valuable information from the events, then utilize them to do something. A case in point is that the intrinsic messages buried in the events may aid you in making money. Take the market of stock as an example, recently a kind of super fungus came into being, which can result in a death rate of sixty percents. It is not surprising that wise people may learn from this news, and consequently, they bought the stock in the block of medicine. Therefore, it turns out that the stock price of medicine increased higher dramatically. To summarize, knowing the relationship between current events and your work offers a new way of making your fortune.
Last but not least, knowing the events can broaden your knowledge, widen your horizon, as well as stimulate your interests. You can imagine how much joy as well as knowledge you will get if you know how the dogs and cats exchange their emotions, how the Everest got the height, how clean is the water in Dali, how fast the trains in China are. Consequently, you get the chance to improve yourself effortlessly.
To sum up, I strongly agree with the statement that we are obliged to get to know the global affairs no matter they have a relationship with us or not. Because these affairs influence others’ lives profoundly, and we can improve ourselves and got valuable information through concerning these affairs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, as for, for instance, kind of, you know, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8449197861 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7796223552 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580213903743 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8938918319 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3684210526 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31578947368 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267191810313 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656949690168 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687904976676 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130784457522 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559117645438 0.0645574589148 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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