Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Leadership can be so hard to describe and it means different things for different people. It could be related to the leadership of our self, our family, our work in the workplace, the leadership of a group or leadership of a community. Leadership cannot be a talent; it will earn by effort, with scheduling an excelling program for the future of our life.Then, I strongly disagree with this statement that leadership is a talent and comes naturally. Leadership is some steps for reaching goals. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs. Leadership is described below:

To begin with, leadership is some steps which causes to become successful in the future and a leader achieves significant knowledge by effort, studying a lot, education and having a good management skill. Furthermore, For reaching to success, a leader could be guidance and a candle that recognize the way of success. For example, leadership is so necessary for an organization. A leader should create an inspiring vision of the future, motivate and inspire people to engage with that vision, manage the delivery of the vision then building a team that is more effective at achieving the vision. Nevertheless with doing these steps employees distinct a realistic depiction with providing direction and setting priorities. Visions provide marker in an organization, what are the way and where is the destination. A leader should use various tools to analyze the way of achieving success. Leadership motivates people to work hard, the leader alters momentous changes and should be ensured if the works have done correctly. Thus, leadership means set direction and help themselves and others to do the right things to move forward.Not only leadership make a person successful, but it also makes people self-organized.

Moreover, every person has personal leadership in life; personal leadership is a powerful thing, it extracts our potential. Personal leadership is a way to lead ourselves from inside out to detects ability and interest. It is better to say leadership is one of our most notable tools for achieving more meaning and making life as we want. If people obtain personal leadership, they can crystallize their thinking and establish the direction of life, commit themselves to move in that direction, do determined action and do whatever they identify as their goals in life.Indeed, people can design, create and achieve their ideal lives. People should think and ask ourselves how do I need to be and act and think to reach their best. Not only leadership make a person successful, but it also makes people self-organized.

Thirdly, every person has personal leadership in life; personal leadership is a powerful thing, it extracts our potential. Personal leadership is a way to lead ourselves from inside out to detects ability and interest. It is better to say leadership is one of our most notable tools for achieving more meaning and making life as we want. If people obtain personal leadership, they can crystallize their thinking and establish the direction of life, commit themselves to move in that direction, do determined action and do whatever they identify as their goals in life.Indeed, people can design, create and achieve their ideal lives. People should think and ask ourselves how do I need to be and act and think to reach their best. Not only leadership make a person successful, but it also makes people self-organized.

In conclusion, I strongly think leadership is not a talent which is some steps for making the best of ourselves either in personal life or in the workplace. Leadership needs making plans and identifying which goal is the best for the illustrious future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3100.0 1977.66487455 157% => OK
No of words: 603.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14096185738 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9477358868 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.376451077944 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 950.4 618.680645161 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4466112841 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5357142857 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46428571429 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177460349292 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590862724811 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411285223138 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114222539934 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638277781341 0.0645574589148 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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